5/21/2007

Try a haiku

Haiku is a three line poem of seventeen syllables in all.

Look for Buddha outside your own mind,
and Buddha becomes the devil .
-Dogen

The break up of the syllables is in little lines of 5-7-5 syllables each.

Yesterday it worked.
Today it is not working.
Windows is like that.
-Microsoft message probably.

Haiku generally do not use metaphor or obscure imagery, nor do they reflect the feelings or inner life of the poet--at least in an obvious way. It is rather an expression of egolessness in which the poet turns outward to fully experience and capture the essence of being in a particular moment at a particular place.

You rice-field maidens!
The only things not muddy
Are the songs you sing.
-Raizan

Haiku shows us how see into the life of things and gain a glimpse of enlightenment.

The snow of yesterday
That fell like cherry petals
Is water once again
-Gozan

Haiku emphasizes being in the moment.

A sudden shower falls
-and naked I am riding
on a naked horse!

-Issa.

Haiku knows when enough has been said.

5 comments:

claytonia vices said...

Hmm.. got it! :-)

ashwini said...

why dont you try your hand at the chinese poem or a haiku?.......if yuor poetry is anything like the pictures you make .....i would love to hear!!

Rafiki said...

Do u think I can?
I guess I should try atleast
Yes now I can ya??

ashwini said...

ya ya!

Sleepyface said...

hokay!

thanks, you stopp'd by
haikus i did give a try
zero chances you'll think this, a lie

and, this is my favourite:

Three things are certain:
Death, taxes, and lost data.
Which has occurred?

more fun here:
http://www.weirdity.com/jokes/microsoft.shtml